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Re: With a Dying Breath (PG-13) (edited)
I'm glad I'm over 13!!!:D You definitely have magic fingers, if this is your beginning with poetry I cant wait to see the end. Your work is really good. please ...
Oct 24, 2009 -
Re: What is love?
This is what I call small but mighty! Totally thought provoking. I was particularly pleasantly surprised by the fact that it didn't have any unnecessary dreaminess. Sometimes poems are like ...
Oct 24, 2009 -
Re: First Day Essay
First I most commend your humility. I'm very impressed. In writing, I've learnt that there is one thing to spin a story there is another thing to narrate yours. Reading ...
Oct 24, 2009 -
Re: I Didn't Know
My question is who won't like it? I'm totally inspired. I don't know how you do it but you did it very well. I think your really talented. Well done! ...
Oct 24, 2009 -
Re: The Funniest thing thats ever happened to you
Good one! This one was actually told to me by the "victim". He's this friend of mine that used to co-own a club. So after a really crazy night, staying ...
Oct 24, 2009 -
Re: Unexpected Love... SSBB Peach, Marth, Ike, Zelda
Hi ya, just for the record I applauded!!! Your story held me spell bound and I think it was really nice that you wrote it for someone. It was really ...
Oct 24, 2009 -
Re: Over the top
Hi, I think you're a great writer. And will most likely keep your readers spell bound. I don't think I can really complain about your grammar because I'm also still ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: Thoughts
Thank you all so much for commenting on my work. Will totally work on everything you said. Actually never had my work looked at before... It's nice to know its ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: Ummm....this is me
Hi ballerina I'm new here and somehow i dont think i'm doin this right i mean going through the website cos right now i'll love to post something new but ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: Following Your Heart is Hard To Do
wow...this must hav been a tough experience...I really hope you right a continuation p.s stop running away from him obviously the feelings are mutual
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: Struck Sightless-chapter one
More than anything I love your title: really made me want to read it... Nice work
Oct 21, 2009 -
Re: Thoughts
There was a peacefulness that seemed almost perfect. It was a place that you'll most likely not want to leave. Then all of a sudden you realise its fading away. ...
Oct 21, 2009
